HELPi am in desperate and dire need of help and criticism.
Halo -working title- chap. 6‘Oh my god, The Birthday Massacre!’ Handing her money over to the bargirl, she raced back with the drinks to where her friends sat, all of them talking and laughing and paying no attention to the song. ‘The Birthday Massacre, they’ve put The Birthday Massacre on!’ cried Vix to all those at the table. ‘We know, we know! Sit down and gimme my drink,’ said Jodi. She sat down, almost slipping off the chair, telling herself it was the effects of the song and not the vast amounts of alcohol in her system. Laughing, she sang along, suddenly feeling better. They had been out for two hours now, forgetting all about the daHalo -working title- chap. 6
Halo - working titleThe weather had just started to become bitter again. The sudden cold of September had its own nasty bite and hold on everything, tinting all with the vague blue air of autumn. Just a few weeks ago the streets of Blackpool had been smothered with the crowds of tourists and students from all over the country, but now only a few tourists and those who lived here remained.Halo - working title
The cold black waters lapped back and forth on the beach generating a calm, cooing noise that soothed her into a state of reverie. She sat there, her last cigarette in hand, almost forgetting about it, taking a drag each time she saw the ash blow past her in the breeze.
KJG
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WARNING: I cannot be held responsible for the above, as apparently my cat has learnt how to type.
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dob you still use msn?
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little pretty one.
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little pretty one.
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little pretty one.
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its me, faithy. lol. just stoppin in to say hi! hope your cold goes away!
Love ya!
Only I myself havn't really got on that ride yet...but I am working on it.
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Right now I am sitting here thinking of what to place here, and this is all I could come up with...*Slaps self on wrist*
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